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Chap32 - The Cost of Paradise pt2

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Loverofpiggies, October 16th, 2009, 7:37 pm

Chapter Descriptions woah wut? And one of my favorite little sessions when I finish one chapter, the start of a new one! And, you know, the explination.

This chapter may be considered a little rushed. But I HAVE to move the story ahead. The backstory and the gods and the angels and all that jazz have a huge complex thing behind them all, however I have to make it simple as possible to move to the most important factors in Joey's life. Those are most certainly the most complex and detailed, crucial points in Joey's character, and those are exactly what I'm aiming to get to. Hopefully I can get to the part I want to be at, at the end of this chapter.

Beyond that, there is nothing I can say.

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Comments:

RedSong, October 16th, 2009, 8:30 pm

:) I looooove Joey's outfit! I would definitely wear that. I like the stripes and the style you used for it. :3

Bubblesita, October 16th, 2009, 8:31 pm

OH AHMYGAWD!
He's so...CUTE <3_<3

I love love love love love it. Times a bagillion. 8D

And I loved that last chapter. Revealed a bit of past, how lovely.

I'm all excited about this new chapter. I think I'm unhealthily addicted to your comic. *developing a fetish with it? maybe* O_O

Kirlily, October 16th, 2009, 9:10 pm

Awww, he looks so cute! And then I remember that he killed Vally, and the bad memories come flowing back. ;_;

Did you photoshop to color/draw this? Because I love the texture.

Raine-chan, October 16th, 2009, 9:47 pm

So stylish. Can't wait for more of his past

Mr.Skeptical, October 17th, 2009, 2:53 am

Haaay, I recognize that tie =D

Ral (Guest), October 17th, 2009, 8:05 am

Haha, it'd be nice if Val made that.

4thWarmasterKais, October 17th, 2009, 10:48 am

Joey has an immaculate sense of style. :D

Immolate (Guest), October 17th, 2009, 11:30 pm

Joey has an immaculate everything.

Kaitousblackwings, October 18th, 2009, 12:58 am

I already smothered you with love for this pic on dA, so I'll call it good here XDDDD

AnonFan (Guest), October 19th, 2009, 4:08 am

Finally made it to the end... for now...

Amazing story, love it except for Valentine dying... :'(
WHYYYY???
Male Asian prostitute FTW!! Joey should have just taught him a lesson and let him live... Val... DD:
I mean, Val was so freaking scared of him coming back to life, he didn't need to kill him.

But psycho Joey/Kain's not bad.
Or the vampire whats-his-face (I forgot it during this whole angel-Joey/Kain episode. XD). He does need to be a little neater with his habits though.

I'm going to read it again right now... and stop before Joey goes insane and kills Val... so I can live in denial. :D

AnonFan (Guest), October 19th, 2009, 9:15 pm

Read through it again... up to just before Joey left Val to die... and I'm wondering:

HOW THE HECK COULD VALENTINE BE TRAPPED UNDER A PLANK OF BURNING WOOD?

He could have just pushed it off and ran, even with his injuries... Val... :'(

Loverofpiggies, October 19th, 2009, 11:30 pm

Anonfan: First off, I meant to thank you for reading through it all and enjoying it!! XD

Second off, about your second question, there were a couple other factors. One was the smoke, smoke can really mess you up in a fire and begin to make it very difficult to move when you cant get enough oxygen. (Yes I know he's a vampire but my rules for vampires are different from the norm) He also fought pretty hard, all things considered with his leg. But the pain from a stab wound would eventually really weaken you.

AnonFan (Guest), October 20th, 2009, 8:43 am

True. Btw Can I steal, er.. Make a "cosplay" of this outfit?
I still need a hat like that though.

AnonFan (Guest), October 20th, 2009, 6:29 pm

From the Original AnonFan Okay, first of all the comment above this is not mine. I don't know who's using my name, but I wish they wouldn't. I don't want to be held responsible for something I didn't say. The comment in question isn't anything bad, but it could have been, and I'd like to avoid that... Show some originality, you stealer! (half joking/sarcasm, half serious) That aside...

I loved reading through this- it's an amazing story, and I wish I had half your talent- plot-wise and drawing-wise. And I can't wait to see what happens after this whole Heaven arc... even though I know Val probably won't come back to life or have miraculously survived somehow. :'(

And I didn't think there was that much smoke to impair his ability to escape in that short of a time. Even considering blood loss from a stab to the leg and a bullet in the shoulder. But I suppose that's artistic license for you. ;)

Then again, there was probably some shock from watching Joey come back to life and go all creepy with his missing eye... Seeing Joey like that made ME shiver. But conversely, the adrenalin rush should have helped, right?

Now I'm confusing myself. Damn overanalysis. I'll just accept it before my head explodes. x_x

Sorry if I sound critical. I don't mean to; I just tend to be really straightforward. (Which gets me in trouble sometimes...) And really sad that Val died.

Loverofpiggies, October 20th, 2009, 9:23 pm

Hey no its all good, anything but flaming or just acting like an ass is pretty welcome here. You brought up good points, and really all I can say in my defense is its quite hard to think out every detail when you're working on a story as detailed as Mortifer by yourself. I mean, I dont have an editor or a cowriter or anything, this is all done purely by me.

So its not all that shocking some anomalies or such may show themselves eventually, since I draw things other people notice that I dont the first time around.

No its not critical, you were very respectful in what you said and had some positive feedback, which is always a warm welcome when I work as hard as I do.

I'm afraid I cant reply to some of your other things, except I also cannot wait to pass this flashback and get to the absolute craziness that happens after it. :D Thank you for such an awesome comment, Real AnonFan. ^^

AnonFan (Guest), October 20th, 2009, 9:43 pm

LOL, Real AnonFan... I should just make an account so people can't impersonate me, but I'm too lazy. And it takes me forever to think up a name... I've had bad experiences with them... >_>

Haha, thanks. I was a little worried, because others have ended up getting REALLY mad at me when I offered some criticism of their work.

And I understand how it's hard to keep everything realistic (especially since this is a fantastical story). I've had people point out my mistakes in my fanfictions- chronology, impossibilities, conflicts with what I've written before, conflicts with the original story, etc. I usually just say thanks and fix it, though I suppose it's harder when you have to illustrate the story. XD

This is really bad, though. I kept coming back to this page every couple days or so to see if there was an update. And now that I've started commenting, I keep checking back every ten minutes to see if there's a reply. XDD

Why did you have to write such a great story?? I'm wasting my life on here. x_x

Motion for regular updates, ie: every Saturday or every other Sunday or something. All in favor, say aye. ;)
(^That's mostly a joke. I understand life gets in the way, writer's block, etc.)

Loverofpiggies, October 20th, 2009, 9:52 pm

Well I do have another webcomic that actually does have regular updates on Saturdays. However I'm so used to the crazy update schedule of Mortifer I cant conform to anything else. XD

No, I dont get really mad when people critizise. I do, however, get irritated if you're an ass about it. Which you arent, dont worry. XD

There will be an update soon, I'm working on a page right now.

AnonFan (Guest), October 20th, 2009, 9:54 pm

Uh-oh. I clicked on your username. I saw a list of other comics you're doing. I'm going to waste the rest of my life reading those and waiting for Mortifer.

On a slightly humorous note, I have a tendency to read fast, so for about ten chapters, I was convinced this comic was called "Mortimer." Because that name is more familiar to me than Mortifer.

Can't wait for the next page!!!
And it might actually be better this way- we get a pleasant surprise whenever you update this!

Fake Anon (Guest), October 23rd, 2009, 11:28 am

I thought AnonFan means Anonymous Fanatic.
Like Anon is everyone without a name.
I have ordered a hat like this, when it arrives I may post a picture.

Loverofpiggies, October 23rd, 2009, 11:30 am

oh awesome. XD I want a hat like this myself. ^^

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